rachel eaw

i REALLY like this poem i think it has had a lot of thought put into it it must have taken you ages well anyway, it's perfect so don't stop ...

hey good discription of yourself laura all of these things r tru especially dragon master of scotland bye

Empty i walk alone in the thoughts of dispear i feel nothing,no pain,no fear i am empty inside the lands that surround me there is nothing but me this land ...

i thought this was amazing! the style is great and the words are perfect u write ten times better then me can you look at my work on other poetry ...

hey this is good , keep writing

blurry ,yes. but good .keep drawing

thanx every1 for the tips i'll usre them next time

My First Song Once i thought My life was good But then it Turned away It all turned Black and bad for me I really should have stayed CHORUS I ...

thanx but i think ALONE is better

alone I stand upon a planet in space So silent, and not a trace There is nothing No sound, no civilisation All i can do,is try to be patient Then! ...

Popularity All people who are popular Have stylish clothes And cool sports cars The things they say Like shut up or go away They wind folk up Then you cry ...

Critisizm When i write It makes me happy But people think It's really crappy It's not the best Says the rest they don't know how hard it is for me ...

It's quiet and sleek With fangs so sharp and long It's so frightening It comes out when your asleep In the deep darkness of the night It's so frightening Be ...

So elegent and bright She will fly all through the night Like a swan she glides across the sky With not a care and not a cry As she glides ...

Weddings are loving,Weddings are fun And this is the most special one Because my mum and davy [step dad] are here And they've been toghether for almost ten years When ...